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08-23-2009
|  | Master Sergeant | | | Join Date: Jul 2009
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Reputation: 19 Level up: 60%, 201 Points needed |   | | | Cataclysm: Closed Beta Scam
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08-23-2009
|  | Contributor | | | Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Sony Vegas
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Reputation: 90 Level up: 97%, 33 Points needed |  | | | There are lots of grammar mistakes. If you don't know that much English (it's not your native, for example) I can fix them for you. Do you need my help or will you fix them yourself? |
08-23-2009
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Originally Posted by jimei  There are lots of grammar mistakes. If you don't know that much English (it's not your native, for example) I can fix them for you. Do you need my help or will you fix them yourself? | No it is not my primary language. I would love to have your help any time. |
08-23-2009
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Reputation: 1 Level up: 2%, 491 Points needed | | | | looks beautiful. good luck.. ill do a third person check if you guys want =] haha |
08-23-2009
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Originally Posted by Mr. Clean No it is not my primary language. I would love to have your help any time. | Ok, first I'm going to rewrite your first Q/A in the FAQ, because it is the one with the mistakes (the others are copy/pasta from Blizzard's FAQ).
Also, it appears that all the ' are missing. I think you should re-copy/paste or actually if you did copy/paste it, I think it's a problem with your template which eliminates the '.
EDIT: Here is how I would have done it:
Q: World of Warcraft: Cataclysm - Closed Beta
A: Blizzard Entertainment would like to present to you the World of
Warcraft: Cataclysm Closed Beta!
If you are looking at this page, you are one of the special few who will
recieve FREE invites to the World of Warcraft: Cataclysm Closed Beta.
You will be able to transfer one (1) of your current characters onto
our Closed Beta realm and embark on the epic journey against the
dreaded Deathwing!
All participants of the Closed Beta must confirm their account by
typing their account information at the link on the bottom of this
page, so that we can verify if you are currently a subscriber to
the World of Warcraft. An e-mail will be dispatched to you, providing
further information about the World of Warcraft: Cataclysm Closed Beta.
Last edited by jimei; 08-23-2009 at 09:01 PM.
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08-23-2009
| | New User | | | Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2
Reputation: 1 Level up: 2%, 491 Points needed | | | | "If you are looking at this page, you are one of the special few who will
recieve FREE invites to the World of Warcraft: Cataclysm Closed Beta.
You will be able to transfer one (1) of your current characters onto
our Closed Beta realm and embark on the epic journey against the
dreaded Deathwing!
All participants of the Closed Beta must confirm their account by
typing their account information at the link on the bottom of this
page, so that we can verify if you are currently a subscriber to
the World of Warcraft. An e-mail will be dispatched to you, providing
further information about the World of Warcraft: Cataclysm Closed Beta."
I think that at the end of the first sentence, you should add "event". But thats just my opinion.
And also in the first sentence, second paragraph... the word "typing" should be "entering" or make it ... "All participants selected for the World of Warcraft: Cataclysm Closed Beta event will need to sign in to confirm (their account or something of the nature) at the link below."
Hope this helps
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08-23-2009
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