[Rake]

Hey im really new to this so i would like to know what i could change
to make my sig look better.



Thanks for every comment

(Also if anybody likes this i would give it away and change the name for you)

[cgrock]

Hmm, I'm not sure what it is about it... but I like it.. nice job man

~Cgrock

[Piersd]

uhh, i dunno what to say :S... maybe because i just woke up >.<

but overall, i really like it

[CarlosJ]

Regarding what to change, to perhaps improve it; i feel the text lets the sig down alot for me. curently it looks like a real nice sig (il get onto that later:P) but just looks as though you've just found it and plonked your name on it (i'm sure thats not what you have done but i'm trying to emphasise the point about the text looking out of place)
i would advise you to put the text on "overlay" or some other blending option so that it fits with the sig a bit more, also as a general rule outer glow is unecessary unless extreemley subtle because otherwise it makes the text stand out and detract from the focus which is the sig.

i really like the blending of the background with the brush work and the subtle colours that match each other giving nice flow. i also feel the render is nicely blended, nothing overthe top but simply done so it fits with the background to continue the depth. however i feel on the left (above the shoulder) you should change the light and dark around, only so it gives more a feel of depth, and so that the render is on a different focal layer to that of the light. or instead darkening the left side of the render which would provide a similar effect, so that it reflects the light source illuminanting from the right. i would have perhaps also have liked to have seen a bit more emphasis on a light source just so theres a bit of contrast in the sig as the colours are kind of dull (not a bad things thats just how it is) overall i think its quite a nice sig just a few areas that could perhaps be altered slightly to give a bit more of an "edge" to it

[[Jwicky]]

Originally Posted by Rake

Hey im really new to this so i would like to know what i could change
to make my sig look better.



Thanks for every comment

(Also if anybody likes this i would give it away and change the name for you)

I like it, FMA ftw, my only issue with it is text and contrast, this is a idea of what I would have done with it:

[Narudan]

The contrast is better, but you should add a light source if you make it like that, the text was fine.

[[Jwicky]]

Yea, I'll agree after looking at it again text was decent, as far as light source, i hate flares, no?

[Rake]

Thanks for all the comments ill have a look into it later

[omgcool7]

not bad :P looks relay nice

[Ajuma]

8/10, the other 2/10 is because I think Anime is stupid.

Overall, well done

[shink]

Originally Posted by jwicky

Yea, I'll agree after looking at it again text was decent, as far as light source, i hate flares, no?

light source does not = flare

brushing/gradient/lighting effects, etc.

[CarlosJ]

Originally Posted by Narudan

The contrast is better, but you should add a light source if you make it like that, the text was fine.

sorry if that came across wrong, i don't think the text itself is bad i just don't think it matches the rest of the sig (hence why i said it just looks plonked on) because the text has alot brighter contrast and more vivid colours to the rest of the sig i feel it stands out too much. i think jwicky has got the contrast correct in his attempt and adding the text to that will fit nicely compared to beforehand. sorry if i gave the impression the text itself was no good

[sascatuan]

Anime adds for some of the best signitures imo, the original is too dull, jwickys revision is very nice, the test doesnt quite fit it, the original text should be a tad bit bigger, by maybe 2px or so. other then that 6/10 atm FMA ftw

[Narudan]

Originally Posted by carlosj

sorry if that came across wrong, i don't think the text itself is bad i just don't think it matches the rest of the sig (hence why i said it just looks plonked on) because the text has alot brighter contrast and more vivid colours to the rest of the sig i feel it stands out too much. i think jwicky has got the contrast correct in his attempt and adding the text to that will fit nicely compared to beforehand. sorry if i gave the impression the text itself was no good

No i was referring to jwicky, meant the text looked better before ^^

[Flipperfin]

I really like it, imo the colours in the bg goes well with the render's, and theres a nice flow.
8/10 from me :>